Dead Girl!

By M Morgan

 Dead Girl
Ate 3, at, 5 , at 7
Holding your tears
dealing with your fears
prayed for one good hand
she sped from your comands

Run girl! Run!

In a house of enemies
Rich house of fiction
put the fear of god
under the her fragil heart
Open your wounds
again and again

Run girl! Run!

father and sister
Dirty, placed the sin on the girl
much blood has being pour out
your blood will be next
you shall suffer for
tears shed in roofs

With Faustos on the wall
Gárgulas at the windows
shadows at night
they are stricken with grief
Now is late!
the girl is Dead!

No more runs girl
No more fears
you re dead
and ready to life!

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Copyright 2012 M Morgan
Published on Monday, November 19, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Virgils Vigil On Friday, February 1, 2013, Virgils Vigil (75)By person wrote:

    This is a great write. A powerful rush. My only criticism is the final line. I don't know if it is a typo or intentional, but I would rather read it as either "ready to live" or "read for life". Either would be a fantastic final line and an impactful end to an impactful poem. Write on. Scholar

  • PhyllisK On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, PhyllisK (6)By person wrote:

    I can relate to this...and there is more to death than just a physical death... thank you for sharing!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, November 20, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...a girl destroyed by her family. do they grieve for their corrupt souls?...

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