Broken Response Feat. ThreeTears

By Killerdemonchick

I feel your skin on mine
and i hear your sweet whispers
My mind... so sublime
I took a thousand mental pictures.

I only feel coldness all around
and I hear your screams
So profound
i lose those mental pictures...

My lips brush your cheek
your hands squeeze my own
You and I are so unique
you give me chills to the bone.

I try to kiss you, but you cringe
your hands push me away
I feel myself unhinge
and all I see is grey.

I know you're broken
but I do not care
Just remember the words that were spoken
what you did wasn't fair.

But I'll try to understand...

You know I'm broken
but you do not care
I remember the words that were not spoken
what I did wasn't fair

I will never understand...

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Copyright 2012 Killerdemonchick
Published on Wednesday, November 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: Great Poem (mainly because I wrote some of it :P -3T)

  • A former member wrote: Excellent work, both of you. Quite the haunting write this, the story of two broken souls, trying to repair each other. Sweet and sad.

  • A former member wrote: :) nice work *high fives Sam*

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