Creamy, White, in Secret

By lupus tenebrae

 



Little box of secrets, coloured creamy white,
buried end to ending in an effervescent night
lexicon of moments came to living in a verse,
cozier in feeling, all the happiness we’ve nursed

reached to find a bosom, found its way inside,
read its cover’s knitting, in the bed in which it lied,
found its curtain calling, in a simple little rhyme
a classicist had written with a word before its time. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, November 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Sifting through all the records, photo albums and bibles, you may find a lost verse or two.
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  • Lux On Friday, July 5, 2013, Lux (299)By person wrote:

    Also, "Not bad" is a pretty crappy comment. You should read up on how to comment without insulting others. There's a link for that, right, Darun?

  • SilentStalker On Friday, July 5, 2013, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...if we're gonna start complaining about "not bad" being insulting, we might as well moderate half the comments off the site for being two words...slow your roll, chica, and let the author make that call...last I checked, they can delete their own comments if they dislike them... :D Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Not bad but some of the lines might be from the memories of others too. Scholar

  • lupus tenebrae On Friday, July 5, 2013, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    If you're insinuating what I think you are, let me put your mind at ease. My work is, always has been and always will be genuine. Now, some of the lines are bound to seem familiar; there are only so many words in the English language that make sense together without sounding like a discordant mess. I assume you're new here, so here's some friendly advice; perhaps you should read a little more into someone before making a baseless accusation. I encourage you to read more of my work though, it too is genuine, and much better than this contrived little thing. I'm still a little buzzed from earlier, so, correct me if I misinterpreted your comment. Scholar

  • Dei On Wednesday, November 14, 2012, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    what a find!

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