. . fire.water . .
By NikesRain
there's a catch
always
in my breath
you in my desire
a subtle gasp
as your hand tightens
around
my wrist
eye to eye
locked
and loaded
that storm
rolling
beneath
the surface
undulating
within your blood
i hear it
stay
speaking in tongues
beneath my skin
coaxing my own
to flow writhing
searing
a path
along every nerve
let
me go
before i expire
such
intensity
there is no denying
i would drown
within the tempest
of you
willingly
i feel it
stay
so i do
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Copyright 2012 NikesRain
Published on Thursday, November 8, 2012.
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2016, Dimensions
(95) wrote:
Wow, the intensity of your words, it's only at the end you realize that you're so drawn in that you're holding your breath. "To flow writhering searing a path along every nerve", nice images to think about.
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, Tonights Decision
(137) wrote:
lost in the moment..
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A former member wrote:
so passionate.. just beautifully marvelous.. i love you works!!
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
"Stay" (just a little bit longer) a golden oldie, circa 1960'ish. Wonderfully wrought, the battle of need perhaps, between the rational and the ravenous, cheers!
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
...I see passion & tempers raging in this. the battles that all couples engage in. maybe you should go, but you don't quite know. but the fighting might stop 1 day...so you stay...
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
A very profound passion soaring out of control and then letting go to embrace it makes for a truly amazing feeling while reading. This truly reaches out beyond the text.