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it is not beautiful nor good.
By eidos
I remember the look in her eyes
when she told me that loving isn't the same
as being in love.
and I told her that I agreed
because if I had been in love
I
wouldn't have been able to walk away.
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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Tuesday, November 6, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, June 13, 2023, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
Truthful and perfectly written.
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On Friday, December 30, 2016, sIo
(926) wrote:
Plain and simple I can't read this twice because it's so close to home. I strive for this level of poetry and take my hat off to those who bleed it.
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On Monday, November 12, 2012, jodeanna
(41) wrote:
You say quite a lot with very few words. Sometimes that makes it hurt even worse.
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A former member wrote:
this just hurts like crazy to read.
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Touche, and kiss that one goodbye perhaps? Win the battle and ... Cheers!
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Dei
(665) wrote:
I agree with Cipher. This is honest. Simple. But the simple words are ones that bring forth complexity in emotion and thought from the reader. i enjoyed.
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Strataic
(100) wrote:
This piece is beautifully honest... At a lost of words to be truthful. great work. Thanks
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