Snake Charmer
By Nehema
Down in the deep south
Oxymorons run
amok
Jesus Saves, eat me
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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
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A former member wrote:
"oxymorons run amok" I love that line. Great little write.
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On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
Haha I love this.. "Jesus saves, eat me" that is just great, nice writing :)
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On Wednesday, July 10, 2013, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Still brilliant..Those last 2 syllables explode the whole thing.
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of those churches who put "Inspirational" signs up onto their churches welcoming sign. One in particular I remember was one for Mother's Day. "The best give a mother can give is being on her knees." Uh, yeah... If she were, I wouldn't be here, hellooo?
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A former member wrote:
A very good senryu well structured and quite enjoyable. I enjoyed this quite a lot well done
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On Thursday, December 20, 2012, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Nailed to perfection and loaded with humour. Fantastic haiku.
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On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Luther
(11) wrote:
I am not normally a fan of Haiku, however, this one had me in stitches. I really appreciate the subtlety as an ex ordained Christian Minister. Don't ask! The big guy and I had a difference of opinion in 2008 and we parted company. Good work I appreciated the work done to create it.
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A former member wrote:
lol loved this. Heres false hope, you tell them to kiss your ass. or... eat yu to be precise lol
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A former member wrote:
my snake chamer friend awesome as always i see we colored our hair again? i like it.
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A former member wrote:
Dying young & playing it hard.
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
ROFL! Screw that cannibal cult! That was great!
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Hope I wasn't the inspiration for this one, go North young lady, go North (but not as far as Canada) - cheers and you are a charmer!
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On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Naw daddy, just the hopelessness fed to children and the effects it breeds into adulthood - I was raised Southern Baptist, my grand daddy was a circuit preacher :) oh and a bigamist, lol
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A former member wrote:
crazy and Awesome...........
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On Sunday, November 4, 2012, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
...scary. just like'Deliverance'...
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On Sunday, November 4, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(615) wrote:
I'm gettin' this tattooed to my butt cheek. Good stuff Robyn. Cool. Til next time -
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On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Oh god, will you send me a picture of that??? lol
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A former member wrote:
ROFL.
Very nice lol. Made me laugh !!!
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On Sunday, November 4, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
lol - glad you like it. I was actually pretty pissed off at the nutballs when I wrote this - wasn't expecting a haiku, had never written one before, but it worked out ;)
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Markus Darkscribe
(60) wrote:
Nice title LOL
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Thank you hero for helping my name my masterpiece - LOVE YOU LORD!!
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
Holy wow... Awesome Robyn :D
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
FUCK I WANNA FAV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fuck you .. i love this.. lmfao.. only you.. dick!