Snake Charmer

By Nehema





Down in the deep south

Oxymorons run amok

Jesus Saves, eat me



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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Saturday, November 3, 2012.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Guilt and shame kills
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  • A former member wrote: "oxymorons run amok" I love that line. Great little write.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Haha I love this.. "Jesus saves, eat me" that is just great, nice writing :)

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, July 10, 2013, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Still brilliant..Those last 2 syllables explode the whole thing.

  • A former member wrote: This reminds me of those churches who put "Inspirational" signs up onto their churches welcoming sign. One in particular I remember was one for Mother's Day. "The best give a mother can give is being on her knees." Uh, yeah... If she were, I wouldn't be here, hellooo?

  • A former member wrote: A very good senryu well structured and quite enjoyable. I enjoyed this quite a lot well done

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 20, 2012, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Nailed to perfection and loaded with humour. Fantastic haiku.

  • Luther On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Luther (11)By person wrote:

    I am not normally a fan of Haiku, however, this one had me in stitches. I really appreciate the subtlety as an ex ordained Christian Minister. Don't ask! The big guy and I had a difference of opinion in 2008 and we parted company. Good work I appreciated the work done to create it.

  • A former member wrote: lol loved this. Heres false hope, you tell them to kiss your ass. or... eat yu to be precise lol

  • A former member wrote: my snake chamer friend awesome as always i see we colored our hair again? i like it.

  • A former member wrote: Dying young & playing it hard.

  • Ortolan On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    ROFL! Screw that cannibal cult! That was great!

  • dwells On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Hope I wasn't the inspiration for this one, go North young lady, go North (but not as far as Canada) - cheers and you are a charmer!

  • Nehema On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Naw daddy, just the hopelessness fed to children and the effects it breeds into adulthood - I was raised Southern Baptist, my grand daddy was a circuit preacher :) oh and a bigamist, lol Scholar

  • A former member wrote: crazy and Awesome........... Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, November 4, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...scary. just like'Deliverance'...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, November 4, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    I'm gettin' this tattooed to my butt cheek. Good stuff Robyn. Cool. Til next time -

  • Nehema On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Oh god, will you send me a picture of that??? lol Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ROFL. Very nice lol. Made me laugh !!! Scholar

  • Nehema On Sunday, November 4, 2012, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    lol - glad you like it. I was actually pretty pissed off at the nutballs when I wrote this - wasn't expecting a haiku, had never written one before, but it worked out ;) Scholar

  • Markus Darkscribe On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Markus Darkscribe (60)By person wrote:

    Nice title LOL

  • Nehema On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Thank you hero for helping my name my masterpiece - LOVE YOU LORD!! Scholar

  • Star On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Star (920)By person wrote:

    Holy wow... Awesome Robyn :D

  • Devilish On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    FUCK I WANNA FAV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fuck you .. i love this.. lmfao.. only you.. dick! Scholar

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