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Lines
By asailorsangel
Deserted in the realm of wrong or right
Two minds so easily blinded by the light
We will never know our left from right
But we all have the will to fight
Abandoned in the mind set
That life moves as fast as that jet
Thoughts that make her wet
Like the first day they met
Racing up the inclines
Like ivy on the vines
Do you think its a sign
Or should we read between the lines
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Copyright 2003 Renee Trinkaus
Published on Thursday, July 31, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, diavolessa
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wrote:
so peaceful...It flowed beautifully and it sets this wonderful mood. yes the lovers seems made for each-other! well done! {dia}
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A former member wrote:
They seem to be a perfect match, these two lovers.
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, Loomer
(11) wrote:
This was really good. I enjoyed the way it flowed and what I got from it. Nice work indeed.
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