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Edan
By GraveFlower
her feet fit in my palm
her hands wrap around my finger.
her nose nuzzles my neck.
she is the best feeling
her eyes hold my soul.
when my world is crashing around
me.
she saves me....
her coo soothes me.
her smile lifts my heart.
when i am
broken
she is thread that ties me back together,
.
..
.
..
.
she needs me
.
i need her
more.
,
,
,,
,
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Copyright 2012 GraveFlower
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A former member wrote:
Wow, very beautifully written. Great piece, loved it!
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On Sunday, January 10, 2016, mpvmuthu
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wrote:
Wow! Elegant expression!! @mpvmuthu5
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On Tuesday, May 14, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Lovely piece! Ciao, T/S
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On Monday, October 29, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Beautiful, someday perhaps, some day
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On Thursday, October 25, 2012, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
this melts my heart, thank you for sharing this beauty - RTK
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On Thursday, October 25, 2012, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
A wonderful, heartfelt tribute to your baby girl..Congratulations on motherhood :)
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
nothing like the bond between mother and daughter. what a lovely poem!
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