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Alley Cat Habits
By Maladroit
These
alley cat habits
that
override my sensiblity
will
be my death.
Dress me fancy,
for
I have died
doing
everything dreamers dreamed
and
what stale lovers
lost.
Though,
I always hoped
upon
something more noteworthy.
-Headlined-
"local girl dies
while
feeding lions lies
and
extracting the burdens
from
the aimless ants."
..... but, is that
not
what I have done?
If not for
others,
but for myself?
Graves
can be warm
when
fools justify foolishness.
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Copyright 2012 Maladroit
Author's Note:
..not that my mother would agree..Comments on "Alley Cat Habits"
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A former member wrote:
That last line is epic ;)
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On Thursday, April 4, 2013, Ashteroth
(192)
wrote:
You strike me as an interesting person :) I relate to the feeding lions and removing burdens of ants, the two extremes are something that frequent my life a lot and it emphasizes how many things are worth doing. ~Ash
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On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, Dreamscape
(22) wrote:
I like your poem, it has some very effective lines in it. Also, I don’t know if u care, but I have accidentally noticed that the word “sensiblity†is missing one of its bones.
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Damn your fucking good!! My god i visualize doing things to you.
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A former member wrote:
heh. I am liking this piece.
The substance is great, a nice flow was felt through out. Good one : )
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A former member wrote:
So much can be taken from this...
Graves
can be warm
when
fools justify foolishness.
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On Sunday, October 21, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...& how do we control that jester, that fool that lives in all of us, & often overrides our common sense?...
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, Strataic
(100) wrote:
Amen... to that Mr. Blue
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On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
The things I would do to you if ever the chance.my god i wanna suck on your thinking stick and swallow the rest of you.. damn girl.. when you post you make your presence felt.. ill take it with me for later .. i love your poetry.
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On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
The first and last stanzas are beautiful and deep.
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