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Our Secret Colonnades
By lupus tenebrae
Yes, this was our place
between autumn’s
colonnades,
but we let it burn
in rusted, orange fire,
swearing the flames had turned red.
Flowers for you,
me,
someone else entirely,
grow in threes, yellow,
the
touch of pollination
lingers on the closest two.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
Two loosely connected tanka, that's about all I can offer for now.Comments on "Our Secret Colonnades"
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On Friday, October 19, 2012, Malcholm Dark
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wrote:
great visuals... I see turning autumn leaves and flowers... maybe a little splash of blood or a zombie caterpillar is needed... lol... nice tankas, now try a really dark tanka... write on, my friend
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