the telling of secrets.

By eidos



you intrigue me in ways that I typically reserve for novels
or the end of a movie that makes just enough sense to matter.
which is why I will always open this book to the last chapter
and read our destruction. over
and over. again.





Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Tuesday, October 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "the telling of secrets."

Log in to post comments.
  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, October 10, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ....this is why people slow down, trying to memorize gruesome details, when the see an accident along the hightway...

  • past tense On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, past tense (16)By person wrote:

    and you intrigue the reader in a way they wish you didn't have a last chapter to skip to. bravo.

  • blue On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    WOW. I have to say, I've stumbled across your writings, and I may have to upgrade just so I can bookmark you.... Every piece I've read has just locked on dead center with me. This one is no exception. Brutally incisive. ~b

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, April 8, 2023, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    When Bri opens a comment on one of your pieces in all-caps with a “WOW”, you know you’ve done something right :)

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    I need to make room on my favorites because this poem just blew me away.

Contribution Level

eidos's Favorite Poets
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]