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Shattered ... Hope?
By BetaWolfinVA
You are really not
what i needed now but you
are definitely
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what dearly i want
some one to love me and to
make me feel alive
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each piece happiness
bought with
another piece of
my so mortgaged soul
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waxing lyrical
as i fall deeper into
the betrayers abyss
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but
dearly i would
love to hold you in my arms
look into your
eyes
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i cling too tightly
until i am pushed away
way
too many times
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i reach-out again
in hopes that i bring
back my
hand intact, un-torn
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Copyright Monday, 1 October 2012 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
Written for someone as i was fallingComments on "Shattered ... Hope?"
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, Lux
(299)
wrote:
Being torn from love like a wet leaf after a storm. This piece made me sigh with wist, even though there's so much love and praise here. I just find it so ... so .. I haven't the words.
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A former member wrote:
Relatable poem. Very nice, I like it
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On Friday, January 31, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Thanks you much :)
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A former member wrote:
such emotion, great write! :D
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
thank you much. I am unsure if she read it, before she introduced me to the world.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
what a great emotional peice and i want to say never bite the hand that feeds you in your last stanza! nice write!
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
shall we say I pulled back a bloody stump... evidently I deserved a "sweet girl" that wouldn't "use me". irony that considering my history.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
the chances we take... hopefully they are worth the nawing.
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
I enjoyed even the break up... it's afterward that gives pain
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