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By Fallenfromgrace
sweetest release, feeling steel
through the vain, Drains a heart that's as black as a shadow.
in moments I'll taste what is bliss through the pain.
For I'm taken, forsaken, I'm broken -n- hollow
the
flow of the blood of my wrist falls away,
for I'm nothing, I'm scattered
and shattered with hate now
I'm clutching so tight as reality fades;
As I falter alone in the darkness of shade.
The essence is bled from this heart made of stone,
for my blood
is now streaming like water.
as I lie in a pool of it drowning alone,
as I choke on the taste of the slaughter.
For the moment I'm free of this world I despise,
no longer a slave in the way.
For
the moment, in peace, release tears from my eyes,
for the shadow is cast, in the casket I lay.
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Copyright 2012 Fallenfromgrace
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A former member wrote:
very dark and depressing... i like this!!completely relatable... entirely understandable...I've been here and back, but you can keep fighting, i dont know u but i'm here for you... :)
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A former member wrote:
As you suggested, I read, and loved this poem. So deep and dark... I've been here before...
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A former member wrote:
THe overall layout of the poem looks amazing which really contributes to the impact the poem has on the reader. It really gets your mind thinking, keep up the good work!
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On Sunday, January 13, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(104)
wrote:
Thank you Beautiful!!
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, horrorchantenshi
(36) wrote:
This poem is absolutely gorgeous. I adore the way th wprds are written. Nice job:-)
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(104) wrote:
I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! Please stick around for more! :)
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On Thursday, January 3, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
So strong it took my breath away. I am thinking and thinking.....
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(104) wrote:
well make sure you breathe~!!!!!! Ha ha.. Thank you very much. I don't have the time to write like I would like to but please always keep a look out for my work. This is the only thing that keeps me going.
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On Friday, December 21, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
Yummy!!! SIS!! You know!!
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A former member wrote:
Love it!!!
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On Friday, December 21, 2012, Fallenfromgrace
(104) wrote:
Thank you!!!
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A former member wrote:
wow..the structure in which you present your write is mind boggling..its amazing :)
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A former member wrote:
broodingly dark, beautiful whirlwind - like structure. thoroughly enjoyed this piece!
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