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Simple Touch
By BetaWolfinVA
just the simple touch
of your hand in mine, ne'er leaves
my
mind, sweet torture
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the thought of your lips
kissing mine
is my constant
memory, and pain
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i hope that you are
happy, with him, while I am
lonely with her, love
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would
that i could have
held fast honor and love both
chose one, cold
honor
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and the pain of your
ever-present, loud, absence
screaming in my mind
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Copyright MONDAY, MAY 02, 2005 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
Written the day before Ravens BirthdayComments on "Simple Touch "
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A former member wrote:
beautiful, romatic yet sad. love reading your work
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On Wednesday, July 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
glad that you enjoyed it, even with the most important role in my life (possibly) coming soon, i still cannot do aught but regret what was lost along the way to my hubris, and pride
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A former member wrote:
The first two stanzas really got me woah..
It's beautiful
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On Monday, April 22, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
some times i believe that this is my most eloquent piece, the one that makes my life the most clear... i am glad that you liked it
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A former member wrote:
Personally, I have felt a touch that burns like fire and lightning within me, tingles my soul and makes my body tremble... And the "ever-present, loud, absence screaming in my mind" is something I will be happier with when I've lost it (those words you wrote are amazing and I can relate to those last lines immensely)... Thank you for your beautiful words and your awesome work... For you and your lovely comment on my poem Lost in a Dream, I think my next will be titled Want…
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On Saturday, January 26, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
This is the one that i cannot get out of my mind... she left me 13 years ago... and she still texts me occasionally when her depression or her husbands gets to hard for her to deal with... some times i think she is my only friend... but that is not the case...
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A former member wrote:
I wish I had more room for fav poems because this would be at the top of the list.... it is a marvelously beautiful piece of art, it spoke it me in a way that brought tears to me eyes... thanks for sharing your talent.
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, FindAgentX
(31) wrote:
happy with him.... lonely with her... my heart sighs in pain. in recognition.
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On Monday, November 5, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
and i am feeling the same way again...
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