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in.dreams
By SilentStalker
The light
[clicks]
--in tandem--
With
the -tick- of the
clock.
All alone [again]
this stormy night,
save the remnants
of her indigo words
as I switched off the phone
And if my feet could
walk
as fast as my heart
beating for her,
I swear I
could make it there
on adrenaline.alone
Satin-turned-flesh
When I close my eyes
And hold her near
And like midnight-daydreaming
I --imagine--
Just how it could be.
minutes.become.hours
hours.become
~eternity~
And I'm
..lost..
In.the.rhythm of
the rain.
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Copyright 2012 Darun Ferguson
Author's Note:
for Kylee... :)Awards
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On Saturday, May 16, 2015, Michael
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wrote:
"If my feet could walk as fast as my heart is beating" Very clever line. Powerful read to say the least.
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On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Stunning. I especially love the ending stanza. 10
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On Saturday, March 1, 2014, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Astounding..A knockout.
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
This sounds something similar to what I just went through. Truly gorgeous wording Darun. So sensual. Such silky mental bliss. Beautiful. Can't say anymore than what's already been said by others.
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
Wow awesome pen!
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A former member wrote:
Wow this is fantastic and beautiful! I love it!
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...a night when the minutes crawl by, that woman haunting the dark. only the rain for company...
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
In one of my poems I wrote about slipping in between one's thoughts and tasting one's soul. I feel like that's what I did here with you...it was soft, it was vulnerable, it was beautiful, it was melancholy. I love your words Darun.
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
....you are so beautiful.... is there any style of poetry that you don't own?
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
My sentiments exactly!
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
No one like you on earth..
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
And like midnight-daydreaming I imagine just how it could be... quite a haunting, touching piece here.. I think there are many of us here that can relate.. nice.
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
very nice stalker...sounds like the perfect storm! awesome visuals of you hinding in a bunker riding out the storm. lol...awesome!
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Vulture
(61) wrote:
again I've got no words for this. beautiful. you've been holding out on us.
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On Wednesday, September 26, 2012, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...more like, I've finally been inspired in an amazing way... :)
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