in ways that break hearts.

By eidos





I used words that doubled as boxing gloves
the night I told you that I couldn't do this anymore.
The way your head rocked back with each blow to your chin
made the way my knuckles cracked under the pressure
seem a little less meaningful. So you spoke with words that
doubled as a punching bag. Taking everything I threw at you
with a slight wince. Like air escaping from a seam.
when you breathe. God, how I hate
the way you breathe.





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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Monday, September 10, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "god how i hate the way you breathe." youre a genius.

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, September 11, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...I like the metaphor's clarity & brutality. pain reflected...

  • dwells On Monday, September 10, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Sounds like maybe somebody could be an asthmatic maybe? Words can wound and can't be called back, well done and welcome to DP!

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed this very much.

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