a tongue like unstruck matches.

By eidos







I remember the way you said you loved me.
That first time, when the twitch in your upper lip gave you away.
When I felt that understanding what a person can endure
made the moments that followed unbearable.
The way the second hand on my wristwatch slowed
and I acted as if the world wasn't crumbling around me.
You were always one for third-rate romance.
So I chalked this one up to an affinity for being lost.
And I remember the wayou said you loved me.
That last time, when the dryness of your eyes
gave you away. I took steps back
and realized that love
just sometimes
isn't.







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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Thursday, August 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • NikesRain On Thursday, August 30, 2012, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    i agree with kinki, great title for the feel and emotion of the piece... this imbues a honest realization that aches to the core... a slipping of quicksilver through grasping fingers... crushing with a soft weight.... well done indeed

  • A former member wrote: Wow...that really put me into the moment. Wrenching piece, eidos. You got me broodin' over here. A harsh & sad finality to it, sometimes this is necessary...very effective.

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