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serenades in static
By eidos
I remember the way you lied.
more than
I remember the way you kissed.
It's a shame to say that the best
part of us
was based on words that felt as empty as radio waves.
yet were as heavy as the songs that fell
from fingers when we
changed channels.
And it all felt right.
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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Tuesday, August 28, 2012.
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On Monday, April 10, 2023, carlosjackal
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I hope you one day publish a book of your works. Your poetry has that rare quality of making the reader thirsty for the next piece. A genuine page turner.
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A former member wrote:
ouch. a swift lament and recognition. i really like the honest kind of unadorned poetics. it strikes a nerve. a real one. thanks.
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, dwells
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First two lines nailed it! Just super and hindsight is a wonderful thing.
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