I'm Listening

By lupus tenebrae

 



"Are you listening?"

I nearly tried to answer,
when my thoughts,
were caught by cigar smells,

perfuming
the pleasantries
of that new car scent,
when the car itself
had long since ghosted 
down the asphalt, one last time.

I tried listening again,
but my thoughts
were filled with laughter
and nervous jackhammers,
trembling the earth apart.

How I cope is how I joke,
the punch line always
lets me down easy, you see,
but I’m listening again,
and I just don’t know how to

answer… 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, August 27, 2012.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Based on a strange text message my aunt received yesterday at the party, I joked and all, but underneath, I was nervous.
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  • soul_versing On Sunday, April 28, 2013, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Distraction and timing are my archenemies too. This was a Spectacular write, that I, very much enjoyed. 10/10 Scholar

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    I love the way you wrote this... The ending is amazing :) Lovely write

  • eidos On Monday, August 27, 2012, eidos (41)By person wrote:

    I could taste a strong Colombian flavor in my mouth. This was enchanting. I can exhale now.

  • dwells On Monday, August 27, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Good listeners are hard to find and it is indeed a lost art - only time we learn anything really...Cheers!

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