how to lose patience

By lupus tenebrae

 



I.

I’m tired
of abstract movie midnight
features, nothing in particular,
and blue Formica countertops
blend in with all the colours.

II.

I’m hurt,
that I’ve spilled out all the popcorn
in hulls of jagged judgment,
and I can’t express my sorrow,
so tomorrow cannot come.

III.

I’m right
and wrongful at the same time,
in arguments of chess games
played by me, myself and eyebeams,
such bitter self-defeating.  

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, August 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My first attempt at list form, with a title alteration. I did get it right with the next two though.
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  • soul_versing On Wednesday, November 12, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Self-realization makes for great writes because it allows you to dig deeper into your mindset. I actually enjoyed reading this. Scholar

  • Dilated View On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    I've spent time within these metaphors before and never quite figured out how to break such cycles. Or to grasp whatever that "something more" is that is ever elusive. Interesting format and perspective.

  • A former member wrote: Deep. Can mean so many things. Very good write.

  • Maladroit On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Maladroit (202)By person wrote:

    II is amazing

  • A former member wrote: this describes my battle with insomnia so accurately in so many levels... all i can so i can relate to this. thanks for sharing :)

  • Poetic-Realm On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Poetic-Realm (258)By person wrote:

    If I could agree to any writing at the moment, this would be it.

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