What I Wanna Be
By Nehema
Wanna be your shirt
Snuggled tightly against your chest
Keeping
you comfy and warm
So I can hear the heartbeat pounding in your breast
Wanna be your favorite car
Gifting you liberation
Drive
me hard and fast
So I can provide you with power and exhilaration
Wanna be your welding torch
I burn hot in your hands
A tool you've mastered
So I can feel your careful tight grip and
deliver your demands
Wanna be your diary
Tell me your sorrow
and fear
A most trusted friend
So I can keep your secrets safe
and your goals clear
Wanna be your blanket
Providing protection
from chills
Securing pleasant dreams
So I can keep you comfy
and share in your thrills
Wanna be your pillow
Lay your
head on my breast
Providing sweet serenity
So I can cradle
your head while you rest
Wanna be your cigarette
I'll
help relieve your frustration
Breathe me in, inhale me
So I
can help adjust your attitude with mental renovationĀ
Wanna
be in your thoughts
Every day you see
You'd never have to be
alone
So I could be inside you the way that you're inside of meĀ
Author's Note:
For the List Poem ContestComments on "What I Wanna Be"
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On Saturday, September 29, 2012, maxstrife
(19) wrote:
awww this is so nice it's adorable i like it, the way its written its so gives me the smitten kitten vibes well done
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A former member wrote:
We are so many different things. I enjoyed this poem. :P
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A former member wrote:
Omg! Wow this is just.... beautiful!!! I really love this! Great job as usual ;)
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A former member wrote:
So beautiful so compassionate so. . .so. . . I love it!!
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A former member wrote:
i wanna be........................... the one
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A former member wrote:
I think the poem was awesome and i would love to have a peace of your brain power
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(431) wrote:
A real good poem and demonstration of love. Congratulations!
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A former member wrote:
your words sooth the sting and relieve the pressure way inside my heart. great piece
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On Thursday, July 26, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Mission accomplished then Stuart...
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A former member wrote:
I dearly love personification, and I dearly love this.
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On Tuesday, July 24, 2012, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
...nice collection of items. I could use a welding torch...
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
Now THAT'S a list poem....(feeling kinda puny..) lol Well done
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
Awww beautiful passionate and romantic I loved this...this has to be my fav by you so far...I loved it (:
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Marvelous thoughts, so well expressed, cheers!
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(615) wrote:
Very sweet indeed Robyn. From and straight to the heart. Nicely done. Good luck with the contest. Til next time -
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
If I was to print this and put it on the wall, it would flirt more then all the teenage posters of women, I used to have combined. Enticing, thrilling, willful, mature. I love it Robyn, it is a node that can be heard loud and clear. ~ Tiger
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Tiger...that flattery is going to make you a favorite friend in no time - haha. Thanks for the compliment, I'll take it ;) - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
love it! so romantic and caring, that is true passion... awesome post! :-)
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Thanks Nar, I'm glad you read it for what it is ;) and I'm even gladder you like it - XXOO
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, haunted
(851) wrote:
aww robyn what a beautiful poem! all those little things that we dont give much thought to, you paid homage to the greatests things that make a relationship thrive. its a lovely poem and i really enjoyed it! awesome!
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On Monday, July 23, 2012, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
Definitely a worthy contender.. A ten for sure..