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Nächtiges Elend
By Corinthian
Sweven :
( a vision in the first minutes of sleep)
It felt like dying
when she
slept
and sleeping
when he died
Shackled
sparrow
wings
and
indigo lambs
baby
Christ
with
burning
wrists
blue
dandelions
quiet
as a
tongueless
bell.
was
my vision
in
my last
minutes of sleep+
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Copyright 2012 Corinthian
Published on Tuesday, July 17, 2012.
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A former member wrote:
My dreams are never as well wrought as this poem. Pity, eh? Neat write! Vivid.
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Star
(920)
wrote:
great beautiful write cori i love this...the imagery is amazing (:
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On Thursday, July 19, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
Thankyou Brandi for reading
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
The white Lord glitters and bubbles over I drink his deep hymns Of sorceries, of spells, of necromancies I swallow his life into my red throat and fall to sleep inside his sacramental hair ++Corii and Crowley collide
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...they (we each have our own visitors) come to us when we sleep & leave gifts. I think they smile if we make good use of those gifts...
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
I do believe this also .. I sleep more than I should hoping and wishing for that one dream I haven't had yet ... thankyou for always keeping me in your thoughts when reading
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
You hit the nail on the head with the first and last minutes of sleep, that's when my muse is most awake. You are definitely into all things blue, cheers!
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
I do blue is very sacred for me thankyou so much for reading.
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
very nice cori, thats quite a dream. could be disturbing depending on ones perspective. i think its beautiful and i can vision these thoughts as im smiling at the suffering from the burning wrists. awesome write. why cant i dream like that! lol..
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
its a spiritual feeling to know you read this thankyou
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