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Bio-Hazard
By Melancholic VIncent
Souring soft skin so slowly
Acidic fluid takes it time
Viscous
and sadistic
Patiently flows
Inversely proportional
To traumatic
burns it inflicts
Melts and boils
Now deformed by the masochist
liquid
The hardened skin erupts blisters
Holding inside unimaginable
pain
Bursting instantly as bubbles of molten lava
Irreversible
damage
Immediate transformation
Dragon scales emerge
From
immaculate, sinless skin
Bathed in the uncaring fluid
Smokes
and steams
While devouring flesh
Remorselessly, relentlessly
Cannibalizing to the bone
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Copyright 2012 Melancholic VIncent
Author's Note:
I started this one by thinking about how pain is the best inspiration for a poem sometimes. Hope you like it. It's very raw.Comments on "Bio-Hazard "
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A former member wrote:
Nice one. This poem really reminds me of Resident Evil, also called Bio-hazard in the Japanese versions.... funny coincidence, isn't it? ^^
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On Sunday, August 4, 2013, Melancholic VIncent
(430)
wrote:
Yeah, I've heard about it. This one is not for everybody, one has to know the hidden meaning of this or you'll end up being known as a sadistic lol
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On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
I loved this... You describe the pain perfectly...I could almost feel it through your words ^.^
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A former member wrote:
Yeah, it's true. I think that's one advantage of the poetry. We can really feel the pain that is inside the words...
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On Sunday, November 25, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Poetry it's an enhanced perception of the world, it goes deep and is very intense like a fire that burns inside us. No man can feel poetry if he isn't aware of that energy flowing through him
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On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Glad you liked it! Acidic pain sometimes feels so much like emotional pain. Guess you can make that association.
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
A remarkable sojurn from damsel to dragon perhaps, so glad it wasn't another worn out werewolf tale, you do rock!
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
I only talked about dragon scales because the deformed skin from the acid may have some allusions with scales from dragon because the skin gets hard and with a shape that may resemble dragon scales as i said. But a poem may take many forms, it depends on who reads it. Thanks for your contribution, it's always welcomed and enjoyed
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
A Slow and torturous cleansing. You do this darker shade very well.
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Thanks for commenting, it's always good to see you commenting. I thought you would like this one.
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A former member wrote:
very raw indeed, love the visceral imagery used here, well done, awesome post!
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Glad you liked it. I was thinking how pain is what sometimes moves me to write something when i did this
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A former member wrote:
i enjoyed it.keep writing
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On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Thanks bradley
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