Babydoll in Blue

By Sean Mc Shane

Thinking of my Babydoll in Blue
                  slow slide into sleep with a soft smile
I want to be wrapped in that warmth with Her
                  though oceans of space have delayed that awhile

So I will swim out to the edge of Her Crystaline dream
                  where I'll find Her sitting on the Golden Moon's shaded side
where She's been waiting for me all along
                   on a shimmering neon beach so far and wide

She reminds me of the times the sky was made of spectral fire
                   when the oceans were flat and carried such Enchanted lands
where we took what was forgotten to make our own sacred world
                   filled with deep romance and heroic stands

Where we once waged war against the agents of the abyss
                   who have now fled to another time and dismal place
on the otherside of the mythical black sun
                   into their lost pathetic realm of perpetual disgrace 

For they no longer wish to hunt Us nor strike at Our Love
                   because they no longer wish to risk oblivion or death
so there will be light winds that carry elegant words again
                   softly spoken thru the heated passion of my Babydoll's breath
 
I gaze at Her beauty on Our walks thru the Fairy Tale frontier
                   She brings me to the peak of some magical immortal pride
We always knew We were Our own magnificent destination
                    We made sure neither of Us were ever just along for the ride

Nothing has the power to threaten Us now or ever again
                     What We have has become so strong and so true
I pray that this endless universe can hold all We have
                     but all I really want is to hold my Babydoll in Blue . . .





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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Saturday, June 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • Magdalena On Tuesday, June 19, 2012, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    So wonderfully romantic Sean, I like and can relate. Beautiful write. :)

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, June 19, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks, M. I'm glad you like it and can relate. I figured you would based on a few of your recent posts. Which were awesome. Cool. Til then -

  • dwells On Monday, June 18, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    How about some pictures? (HA!) - seriously dude, next thing we know you'll be changing your profile too! BUT, our loss is her gain and your happiness is ours too, well done laddie!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 18, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Ha-ha, d. No, I haven't completely lost it in that regard. There'sstill some crazy writes left in me. And no real loss and no real gain, but a lot of happines for sure. Thaks again, d. Later -

  • Devilish On Sunday, June 17, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    I want to be your babydoll.. Damnnnnnnnnnn... Touch me tease me kiss me please me.. give it to me just like that .. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 18, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Dev, you'll always be my Babydoll . . . in Black. Thank always for your hot comments. Cool. Til next time -

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, June 17, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ,,,this transcends space & time. I see several legendary settings in this, from knights & princesses even to Gene Kelly dancing w/Cyd Charisse in a blue babydoll...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 18, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks, 'Blues. I'm glad ya like the trip. I really dig the knight/princess reference. Cool. Thanks again. Later -

  • Nehema On Saturday, June 16, 2012, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Ah Sean, you are capable of melting a girls heart and making her wish her man would say these things to her...sighs... - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 18, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Robyn. I feel bad for guys that don't say these things to their Gals. It's a really cool feeling. Til next time -


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