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Colt 45 1911
By Nehema
I love
it when you use me
When you bring me out to play
You
handle me so expertly
Todays is my favorite day
The
strength in your hand excites me
When you take me from my holster
You grip me so tightly
Your courage I bolster
Eight
and a quarter inches
My cold steel frame
Your warm touch
quenches
My lust for you to take aim
Holding me
steady
You look right through me
Both of us ready
The target you see clearly
Thrilled by your touch
Your finger on my trigger
I adore you so much
Eagerness
growing bigger
Your squeeze like a kiss
I erupt
in ecstasy
My kick is pure bliss
You always pleasure me
Seven rounds are hardly adequate
Extra magazines you
bring
Thrusting in a new clip, so intimate
I'm ready now
to sing
We spend this time together
It's never
long enough
Soon you'll put me back in leather
Then comes
my favorite stuff
Back home you lay me down
Lovingly
you clean me
Check the safety is on
Make sure the chambers
empty
Cleaning patches, toothbrush
Lubricant oil
and grease
Taking your time, there is no rush
You take
me apart, piece by piece
Starting with my slide
Spray in a little oil
Gentle scrub with the toothbrush
Removes the powder and soil
Never stingy with cleaning
patches
You rub and polish me smooth
Careful to not allow
scratches
Never forgetting my grooves
Extra oil
on your fingers
You use to massage my little pieces
Your
gentle touch lingers
While my ecstasy increases
All cleaned and put back together
Time for you to store me away
Until our next endeavor
I'll wait patiently for that day
Your tender care guarantees
I'll never lock up, miss fire
Jam or fail to please
Your gratification, my only desire
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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Saturday, June 2, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Being a loved gun is fun...Comments on "Colt 45 1911"
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On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(612)
wrote:
Nice one N. The love for the gun is always strong. Some times more than others. Awesome. Til next time -
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A former member wrote:
SMH SMH ... HAHA
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A former member wrote:
this brings to mind a saying of pure truth " Today you are the bullet fired from the weapon, in turn making you the weapon. You will make no distinction between practice and war. You will only hit the mark and hit it with the force you have been given."
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On Friday, March 1, 2013, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
Nicely portrayed...I would not trade my 1911 for much...if this is how you write it, I wonder the stories my Kimber tells the other guns....
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A former member wrote:
Hot! lol and I love the allusion to the pistol you've drawn here, clever ;)
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On Monday, December 3, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
what an erotic way to spend time with a gun. you should check to see if they have colt condoms, just in case he isnt shooting blanks. lol...very cool poem and your flow just slides right off the tongue. awesome robyn!
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On Monday, August 6, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
I don't know much about the colt45 ... but it kind of made me want one ;p Awesome write ♥
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A former member wrote:
A great tribute to an awesome piece of hardware :)
Outstanding metaphor throughout this piece.
Sexy in its delivery like this poem takes on a mind of its own. Good one :)
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A former member wrote:
Very nice. Exciting and calming all at once. I love the tempo. Rolled off my tongue like honey.
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A former member wrote:
Omg! You are amazing! Why are you not published? The world needs to hear you!
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On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
I am, on darkpoetry.com ;) Thanks for the compliment, my ego is smiling. Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed this - XXOO
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On Thursday, June 7, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
My favorite gun, this is hot. But she is a high priced whore, lol.
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On Thursday, June 7, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
The best ones are! Thanks for reading & commenting. You have good taste in guns - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
Nothing hotter then a women that can handle a big hard steel gun fully load. Love your work
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Thanks you 6, I like to think of myself as an expert, reality be damned! - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
"Your squeeze like a kiss
I erupt in ecstasy
My kick is pure bliss
You always pleasure me "
perfect! perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have me screaming at the top of my voice.....
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
give me more of this!!!!!!!!!!!
i am so happy i know you
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On Monday, June 4, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Superman, you will be my undoing. I believe that is the highest compliment I've received ever. Your work is stimulating and real, glad to know you too - XXOO
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...spoken by an expert in the arts of gunplay & poetics...very masterful work.
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Ha ha, I WISH! I accept the compliment tho & I thank you, much appreciated!
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Awesome write, R. I love the role reversal of gun love here. Excellent all the way. Til next time -
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Thanks for the comment Sean - I was hoping you'd like it since you obviously know how to handle a piece, by your picture I mean... lol - XXOO
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
AH HA Ha ha etc. this was great! You are indeed a gifted poetess and beyond a doubt, you intimately know your subject matter, cheers Robyn!
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Love you dwells, I'll be writing a little something for you before long - ideas stewing, not yet, not yet - but soon
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
mmm damn this is hot i love it....sexy ;)
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Have I told you lately that I love you.. Have I told you theres no one else above you.. Girl.. Touch me tease me kiss me please me ..
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Touching, tasting, kissing pleasing - love you too Doll Face
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