Thoreau & I had coffee

By ruthless48

i'm going in to Walden
rough hewn furniture on the dirt floor of my mind
i'll be there more than a fortnight
sweat  ~ as i beat seed into soil
and read books that are kind
labor pains to rebirth my Spartan first twinge
now, cannot be held back
technology's convenience has stifled
my diligence left slack
Thoreau said he could not condemn the illiterate
for he  ~Plato~  had not known
as if he were his "next neighbor' *
& from his wisdom 
had not grown
my charge ~  to feed my mind
whole grains plucked, crushed
prepared without leaven
to "prefer the natural sky to an opium-eater's heaven"**


*   Walden, chapter   3, ¶ 10
** Walden, chapter 11, ¶ 8
 

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Copyright 2012 ruthless48
Published on Friday, May 22, 2015.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

yurt yearnings
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  • A former member wrote: This is indeed a cerebral work...& very challenging. Something unique to taste here...out of the ordinary. Welcome to the dirt :)

  • ruthless48 On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    Nagyon köszönöm (hungarian), Basilisk! your words too kind as i flourish deeper in dp dirt. Funny, though, heard a NPR interview, 2day, in which author William Powers created "Walden Zone" in his book: Hamlet's Blackberry. A time out, for all of our tech use, in a cerebral "Walden Zone" like place, that big silicon valley companies-Intel, are instituting for their employees to prevent cyber burnout. I laughed, because ~ I was already at the pond! Thank you for the read~ :)

  • dwells On Friday, May 25, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Too cerebral for me but I do know Walden Pond and Henry David. Some cerebral thoughts to ponder and thanks for the education R48! Make mine black and bitter...

  • ruthless48 On Saturday, May 26, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    Ramen! Cheers! fun interchange, dwells~thanx

  • FadedBlues On Friday, May 25, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...when Thoreau said "Simplify, simplify.", he didn't follow his own advice: he said it twice.

  • ruthless48 On Friday, May 25, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    LOL! classic! an imperfect woodland prophet~even better! Thank you for the insight! and the read :)


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