Truth of the Night

By Sean Mc Shane

It was a long way to go,  so We walked on
out to the farthest edge,  the kind in a sad song

only to be sung at the end,  of a once glorious start
with no vengeance in the trials,  there's no denials tearing it all apart

                          . . .  so We left and wished on the same star
                                 with loose white lies
                                 dragging certain reasons back thru a hole
                                 with simple words building hard goodbyes  
                                 
                                 moving into a shaded area
                                 with a maiden of the desired dream
                                 the essense of a serene goddess
                                 who always ruled the golden scene

                                 You came up with it quick
                                 I barely slapped it together
                                 running our numbers in reverse
                                 calculating the odds of stormy weather

                                 we found a new way to relocate
                                 but grandiose ideas soon whither
                                 white lies turn black
                                 and back to Our hearts they slither

                                 But on a much happier note, Baby !!
                                 You can still muster a stellar smile
                                 even manage to laugh at most of it
                                 though only for a short while

                                 Me, I just explain the mechanical mystery
                                 bastardom ?  or some other weird incident
                                 I just tell them my mother was Irish
                                 and my father was a Farm Accident . . .

That brought Us to our wild garden,  where We found Our future graves
a strange and beautiful place,  with half of a sign that read . . . SAVES
                               
We made Our own holidays under the gun,  always keeping a crack in the curtain
paranoia tries to discover a neon philosophy,  one that was proven to be certain

I realized then who I am,  I tried to hide in my dream empire
remembering on my late arrival,  I had left You at the Spring fire

creative circumstances brought You back,  helped You thru the high marble maze
Our feather dusted dilemas followed,  pushing Us into this drunken haze

couldn't have moved time any slower,  always an unseen barrier
wonder what awaits us now ?  ( and will I ever marry Her ? )

more clues to all of this,  divine mystery still holds Us tight
guide Us thru the dread of the day . . .  Love Us in the Truth of the Night

                            . . . but don't look for Us there, Baby
                                  You remember the Hollow Hiltop ?
                                  I found Our secret there 
                                  It's gonna make Your jaw drop . . .
  






































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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Tuesday, May 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Yeah, I'm scratchin' my head too
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  • Nehema On Friday, June 1, 2012, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    The places you take me, I want a printed book of your work so I can take you with me up into the Olympic mountains, and read you while I'm curled up next to a blazing fire wrapped up in my comfy fleece robe and snuggling with my down blanket, drinking bottle after bottle of rum... I love the places your writing sends me to... - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, R. I am really flattered by this comment. What nice things to say. You made need help drinking all that rum. Maybe I'll join you and read the works to ya out loud. And I love the places your cool compliments send me. Too cool. Thanks again and til next time -

  • Magdalena On Thursday, May 24, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    You are always a pleasure to read Sean. An excellent write, much enjoyed. It seems like a past love that often haunts. :)

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 24, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, M. Pretty much all of my Xes haunt me on some level. but I just thank them now for providing me with an endless sea of . .. shit . . . to write about. And yes, I feel the same about reading you,too. Always. Til then -

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...Partner, you walk the road to hell every day. Hemingway (& how many others?) walked, until he decided to hasten the journey...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 24, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, 'Blues. I'll take that as a very high compliment. Much apprechiated. * I think Hemingway's father was a railyard accident. Cool. Later -

  • dwells On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Bastardom - genius! Really enjoyed this sad tale of two people perhaps who shared much but were doomed from the start and now share a one-sided secret maybe? This was great and I can relate. Thanks man.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, d. Glad ya dig the 'bastardom'. I guess some people would rather be miserable than alone. I used to be one of them. And as far as their secret ? . . I'm not sure either. Thanks for the b-mark high honor. Later -

  • Devilish On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    I want to suck on your mouth while you leak all this out to me. scratching alot more than my head. oh sean your so worth logging in.. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Dev. You always know how to stroke this Leo's mane. ( that's not my mane ) Too cool. Til next time -

  • A former member wrote: Wow, what a beautiful ride, I didn't want it to end - my jaw dropped when there was no answer at the bottom - Brilliant ending!!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Cherry. Glad you enjoyed the ride. One of my fav things to do with writing, is to leave the end up to the reader. They can take it from there. Thanks again. Looking forward to reading you as well. Til next time -


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