ripped your T-shirt
By ruthless48
where are you my shy hologram?
I touch you,
you fade a child
I kiss you . . . blank then a squint
and inside darkness wild
I pull away thinking you're
right
Who the hell am I!?
You touch my side I fall
into place
head on shoulder lips on neck thigh on thigh
where are you you woven so many walls
I'm the self appointed
detective of your heart feeling like I'm
in a dream where you just fall and fall
I ache to stroke your face with my hand
and for all
of your coin spinning thoughts to land
just
long enough for mine to settle out too
So we can really
see
who are we
who am I
who are you
Author's Note:
paint on your blue jeans, paint on your shoesComments on "ripped your T-shirt"
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On Sunday, February 16, 2020, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
This aches, yearns and blazes in all the best ways and grabs the reader from the very opening.."my shy hologram" :O)
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On Monday, February 17, 2020, ruthless48
(173) wrote:
thank you, carlosjackal. such is our poetry pen in the control of our mindfulness journalist. sometimes to our annoyance, but always spitting rhymes of our own moments in time. thank you for the comment & the read. ✌ï¸
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On Thursday, May 24, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Wow.. I've read your work before and every time I find you fascinating .. Thank you for your poetry..
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On Friday, May 25, 2012, ruthless48
(173) wrote:
thank you for the top of the rollar coaster, belly flip smile. plunge. upside downnnn loop~ whew!
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...a hologram: a projection, a foggy vision. a long-ago affair that's now a buried memory...but still ~
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, ruthless48
(173) wrote:
written long ago, not still~just dusted it off for spikedwithLUST. You all inspire me to push on~ thank you!
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On Monday, May 21, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Marvelous game with a hologram or some kind of virtual lover perhaps, new tech make-believe maybe. Softly spoken and marvelous exploration of the mystery of two, thanks.
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On Monday, May 21, 2012, ruthless48
(173) wrote:
seems virtual, it was so long ago. glad you enjoyed ~ thank you