i am evil

By the broken

you see i rather you live a lie

then know how evil i am inside

cause i know one day we will die

and on your shoulder i cry

as we are buried together only one of us will be alive


and to our judgement we will go

for the sins we have commited

but you will be aqquited

cause in heart you are beuatiful

this shit i say is true you know

and you into heaven you will go


but my evil they will see in me

cause to the darkness i am a deity

just ask god and you'll beleive

then hopefully you will see

the true devil i can be

so when i go to hell

rapping to my deathknell

thinkin of you as i fell

i will scream and yell



i wish it could be different

but my wishes are insufficent


please give me another chance

but to my screams the demons just begin to dance


i know when i get to hell i will always try to get out

scream and pout

lookin for you your name i will shout

cause it is you i cant be without

i will find you to that there is no doubt

i dont give a fuck if the devil stands in my way

he better walk away

caus this evil motherfuckers got a few seconds to play

and when i get out of hell heaven wont do shit

destory them with all these sinister verses i spit

they'll cower in the corner from fear of being hit


i bump to a beat, you can not understand

i bump to a beat, that i felt when you held my hand

i bump to the sound of your heart, always in my mind

i bump all alone in the dark,wanting you till the end of time


and when i finally get to hold you

i'm never letting go of you

i'd sacifrice my soul to you

i fought my way through hell for you

i pissed on heaven's gate for you

just to forever be with you

whispering for an enternity about how i love you

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Copyright 2012 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Sunday, May 20, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Killerdemonchick On Sunday, November 25, 2012, Killerdemonchick (125)By person wrote:

    this is great:)

  • Slingnasty On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Slingnasty (167)By person wrote:

    I say wow! Speechless I bow

  • dalphon On Saturday, June 9, 2012, dalphon (86)By person wrote:

    all I could think to comment were corrections, which really means; the only way I could possibly enjoy this one more, is if it were written with perfect grammatically correct english. My only advice, TURN IT UP TO 11!!!

  • Devilish On Thursday, May 24, 2012, Devilish (3797)By person wrote:

    One day you can see the true devil i can be.. i fuckin love your poetry.. you are so dark and so perfect and go unnoticed.. fuck. what to do to get you out there. fuckin lames dont even know what there missing..forgive me for missing your posts.. i love you and your work. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: That was beatiful Joshy but u know i would leave yu in hell all alone, we r going to be cell uddies :) fuck that we can run the place and gouge out satans eyes pot them on sticks and eat them like lolly pops :) love you Scholar

  • A former member wrote: * buddies * put Scholar

  • the broken On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, the broken (25)By person wrote:

    i think u mean wouldnt* leave me in hell lol

  • A former member wrote: yes that what i mean no judge me it was late i was on my pain pills :P

  • the broken On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, the broken (25)By person wrote:

    and i love you too vampy

  • Nehema On Monday, May 21, 2012, Nehema (1313)By person wrote:

    To love like that makes you unable to be evil - you are more like a broken angel in disguise maybe? Excellent write - the rhythm and flow was very nice and the sentiment always a poetic favorite... XXOO Scholar

  • SolApathy On Monday, May 21, 2012, SolApathy (517)By person wrote:

    Sometimes the evil that we do is a veil we wear all to proudly to hide the emotions we dare not let anyone see -Wonderful piece. I look forward to the next work you post

  • RubyXero On Monday, May 21, 2012, RubyXero (579)By person wrote:

    wow. this was amazing.... "...cause to the darkness i am a deity..." loved that part especially.

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