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Fate
By Rebel_Angel
This wasn't exactly what I had I had in mind when I started this poem
but this is what it ended up to be. I think it still needs some works so
if you have comments on how to fix it let me know. I just threw somethings
together and I don't think it flows very good.
They say things happen for a reason,
But do you ever wonder what that is?
Why things can't go your way for a while,
Or why everything bad happens at once.
You would think it would be more balanced,
Some good things then some bad.
Not all bad for what seems like forever,
Then one good thing.
They say everyone has a soul mate,
But then again if they do then why do some people die alone?
Your not suppose to choose who you fall in love with,
Then how come people get divorces,
Aren't they messing with fate?
They say don't smoke you will die sooner,
Well maybe you get killed in a car crash?
That had nothing to do with smoking.
It could have been your fate.
How come we can't know our fate?
Wouldn't that make life a lot easier?
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Monday, July 21, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Fate"
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221)
wrote:
I am glad you chose to write about this topic, but remember Life isn't about the end result, it's about the trip along the way. -Kryz
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
completely agree with kryz...its not the end that matters...its what u do with the time you have...like u said u could die in a car accident. so live every day to its fullest.
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On Friday, August 15, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I have thought about this a few times myself...great write.....
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
this is a great write. it totally applies to life...
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A former member wrote:
Fate is a strange and unpredictable thing, I totally believe in it though. Excellent write, goes straight to the heart. a_o_h
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
I'm not much for fate. I believe we make out own but you do have some good ideas though... Maybe try adding more to make it smoother.
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A former member wrote:
I really, really like this, Kevin. (And its not just for that reason either, though that is part of it) it eases your mind, yet it makes it seem hopeless. To me life is nothing but a paradox, and you demonstrated this wonderfully. It doesn't rhyme, but
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
My name isn't Kevin, you must have me confused with someone else.
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
This kinda seems like someone's last thoughts. Almost what someone would think after getting shot... I don't know why but it gave me that picture in my mind. I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.
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A former member wrote:
i think fate is something set up at birth.. but as we grow older, we gain control of our fate... good work on this..i enjoyed it alot..ADNW
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
The people that know there fate, know it becouse it is there fate to know it. They act in a certain way after knowing there fate wish is then there fate. I love fate all the way to extremes. Same way goes with this poem.
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A former member wrote:
i think it's wonderful... i think the same words of wisdom you gave to me also aply to this piece... good job *~BrightBlack~* :- )
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
nice i think it would make it easier if we knew but then we could chang it and then it wouldn't be fate
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
good write i like it
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A former member wrote:
sounds good to me..the 's are ?'s though
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