. need.les .

By NikesRain









which makes
a louder sound




tears falling
when a dream slips away





or a wish slowly dying
because its being let go 

















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Copyright 2012 NikesRain
Published on Saturday, May 5, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    so much lost in so few words.....well done friend.............urban

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, May 5, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...the sounds of both bellow loudly in the ears of an Angel...wistful & just pretty, really pretty...

  • A former member wrote: such few lines for something so perfect

  • OLd SouL On Saturday, May 5, 2012, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    you're such a tease. give me more... seriously though, I hate that you write this. It breaks my heart.

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