The best failed attempt at poetry

By chococat_122

My fiance: I love your tits. And your hips. And your thighs. And your pretty brown eyes. And your perfect smile. And your joyful laugh that lures songbird out of their nests.

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Copyright 2012 chococat_122
Published on Tuesday, April 24, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and
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  • dwells On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Sounds like a real smooth talker, must be a poet, thanks for sharing and nicely done.

  • ColorMeToxic On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    I read this to the rhythm of "Goodnight Moon" heh. It's sweet of him to take an interest in you enjoy so much. Pretty good "attempt". :) Scholar

  • ColorMeToxic On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    *something Scholar

  • haunted On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    not bad, not bad! short and sweet is good. the last sentence kind of fumbled a bit. this aint a contest and we just comment without judgement......sometimes! awesome umm attempt! lol.

  • chococat_122 On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, chococat_122 (8)By person wrote:

    He said something along those lines, I think I missed a chunk haha. It was sweet nonetheless.

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