The best failed attempt at poetry
By chococat_122
My fiance: I love your tits. And your hips. And your thighs. And your pretty brown eyes. And your perfect smile. And your joyful laugh that lures songbird out of their nests.
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Copyright 2012 chococat_122
Published on Tuesday, April 24, 2012.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Sounds like a real smooth talker, must be a poet, thanks for sharing and nicely done.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(240) wrote:
I read this to the rhythm of "Goodnight Moon" heh. It's sweet of him to take an interest in you enjoy so much. Pretty good "attempt". :)
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(240) wrote:
*something
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, haunted
(851) wrote:
not bad, not bad! short and sweet is good. the last sentence kind of fumbled a bit. this aint a contest and we just comment without judgement......sometimes! awesome umm attempt! lol.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, chococat_122
(8) wrote:
He said something along those lines, I think I missed a chunk haha. It was sweet nonetheless.