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Hush, sweet.
By Idsight
Hush, now
fold into my arms like a paper
boat and I'll go
sailing down your
rivers. Hush, inhale,
with a whisper that
will tug me
where your love beats, the place where
we'll
meet. Fill me up with
winter, you can swallow me.
Twined
between your heartstrings, I am
smoldering. Close your eyes,
sweet.
Come now, melt for me.
Mold into my shape like warm-candle
wax and I'll light your candle
wick. I will
ignite all your
tips and watch you
burn for me, I will watch you breathe,
Hush,
exhale-
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Copyright 2012 Idsight
Published on Monday, April 23, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hush, sweet. "
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On Thursday, November 22, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
wow great metaphors and wonderful imagery.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
damn maybe its just me but i found this to be very erotic. im lovin this shit! its a beautiful write. very well done!
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On Monday, April 23, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
A couple of very cool metaphors, serenly spoken and developed. Smouldering intensity well-done.
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A former member wrote:
I am taken aback by how absolutely real and beautiful this is. I was pulled into it immediately and I just want more. It is completely intoxicating.
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On Monday, April 23, 2012, WarTorn
(40) wrote:
love the momentum, bravo
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On Monday, April 23, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Very beautiful, I really love the first line! Well done
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully done. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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