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Minding the Gaps
By cadymae
I bend down and widen the
top of the fence I'm walking
Each
useful thought
is applied underfoot
Every faint proof shellacked
into place with surety and a nod
Til I am trodding a path
built
astraddle many worlds
which contains its own gravity
a logic resting at cross-strengths
upon the gravity of
other worlds.
The space in the gaps is the most interesting.
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Copyright 2012 cadymae
Published on Monday, April 9, 2012.
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On Friday, April 14, 2017, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Bri nailed it....It's the sincerity of your pieces that really makes them shine so bright. It's like all your pieces are saying, "These are my truths, what are yours?"
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On Tuesday, April 10, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
ty all. y'all's feedback is sweet and kind.
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On Tuesday, April 10, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
We all walk fences between different worlds, and some make the transition better than others, while some forever live in denial. Cheers!
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On Tuesday, April 10, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
This brings to mind a strengthening of ones foundation along the path one walks yet curiosity can get the better of us and make said foundation a bit shaky until one strengthens it again. The challenges of life and how it can so easily trip us up at times....... A wonderful pen.
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On Monday, April 9, 2012, blue
(1454) wrote:
mmm... minding the gaps indeed..... there is a sincerity here, a seriousness given to one's thoughts... and these 'worlds'..... how they forge and influence one's life; how can one not place their full attention to where one had been, to where one is going...? ..."a logic resting at cross-strengths upon the gravity of other worlds" ...how wonderfully worded. Thank you for this full and intelligent read...... most appreciated. ~b
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On Monday, April 9, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...always fun to discover hidden treasures in uncommon places...
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