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blue salt .
By Corinthian
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and the
most unworthiest
shows
brings
the biggest of crowds
while beneath my
quiet forehead
live the most
glorious
disorders & horrors
yet you
give
not
a fuck
to write upon my
diary of sorrows
and madness.
If
I
were
nude
you would
crawl &
swallow the
floor just to taste
my
dripping gold
shallow
&
hard
yet you
give not a
fuck about
me
and
this staircase
goes
on
and on
and
on
while each
night a dead
man dreams of my eyes
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Copyright 2012 Corinthian
Published on Monday, April 2, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
You make me want to weep...this is brutally sad..
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A former member wrote:
disorders&horrors quotable worthy x cheers!
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A former member wrote:
I believe you put a huge amount of thought into every word you write this is fantastic I notice you are including many religious hues in your work I like that, you seem to feel betrayed somehow here. ty
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On Sunday, May 20, 2012, OLd SouL
(734)
wrote:
you remind me of another poetess that use to roam DP, even though you two have 2 different styles, you invoke similar feelings when I read. There's a beautiful morbid thing happening. It hurts when I read but I can't seem to tear myself away from such cryptic hypnotic words that still come across in a pretty package though its all bound in barbed wire. Yea, my words are failing me, but I hope you understand my appreciation.
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On Monday, April 2, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Sounds like somebody is coming in as a lousy second place to a memory perhaps. Well written is sparse text but charged with emotion, cheers.
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A former member wrote:
Sometimes we are just not appreciated for who we are and are over shadowed what we believe is beneath us. Blah.
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On Monday, April 2, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
FUCK ME!!!! Oh my god i love you .. girl you give me chills every fuckin time ... damn!! damn!!!
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