phantasy dancer

By FadedBlues

she moves naked onto the stage,
slow, seductive, a somnolent cat.
the gray shades of this temple reveal
only one color: her red Rita Hayworth hair.

the drum-noise of Night Train, tempestuous tempo,
high decibel, conquers the room, and claims the
back rooms where the other dancers wait;
sniff, shoot up, impale themselves...
to escape their sordid reality.

insistent speakers vibrate, the naked girl writhes,
her fingers tangled in her hair.
hips gyrate, to the left, to the right, hypnotic,
demanding, kindling Desire's fire.
when her legs spread, the scent of wildflowers
whispers into the smoke and the whiskey melodies.

in the shadowed pit, hungry eyes memorize her
beauty, begging embrace, dreaming unholy dreams.
somewhere, another world spins, civilizations rise
and dominate, fall and repeat...
but not here.

the drums, the shadows, the dancer, the watchers,
they cry for their own salvation.

the naked girl dances.

hungry eyes devour her nakedness.

wildflowers perish in smoke.




    

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Copyright 2012 FadedBlues
Published on Thursday, March 29, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...rapture...
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  • blue angel On Tuesday, November 12, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    very exotic in many ways, seductive words you place so carefully, and I enjoyed seeing my nick name in it too, ha;) nice one blues**** (kindling)

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks for joining me in the audience, no cover, no minimum...

  • Corinthian On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian (309)By person wrote:

    Don't forget to tip your dancer and waitress ;)) wink *

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Tips Dakrismena.. lol.. Love my queen... Scholar

  • dwells On Thursday, March 29, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    I think I know this club and Big Red too! Stark detail and so real, are you sure you aren't a performer too? (HA)! Cheers FB and much enjoyed this exquisite slice of life.

  • Corinthian On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian (309)By person wrote:

    A somnulent cat ..... oh my goodness I adore that ..... very very sexy ...Rita Hayworth what a beautiful visual.... I find this whole thing so sexy and classy ... makes me think of one of my idoless's the beautigul Lily St Cyr...

  • Corinthian On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian (309)By person wrote:

    Somnolent even*

  • A former member wrote: how perfect?with a sense of harmony through contradictions

  • Magdalena On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    "wildflowers perish in smoke" How beautifully you portray this rapture..... Excellent blues.

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    I was dancer for 10 years.. one of the best in the state. magazines, travel, one night stands.. a time to remember.. but i think it was me that loved my naked body more than anyone else could.. memmmmmmories..... Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    you need to write your memoirs...

  • A former member wrote: This was artistic. I really liked this. ALOT. I love dancing and this was rythmic and sensous..and I liked the worlds that were falling apart.

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