turn left

By ruthless48

don't throw out i love youz

like lifeboats from your eyes

while we wrestle in a rainstorm

tombstone's muddy lawn our room king size

breathe heavy

bite my lip

don't let another pointless word

slip

spoil

take my hand behind my back

through your hair

i see rainclouds ~ trees black

animals

growl

and

you  

only
 
will

please

me



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Copyright 2012 ruthless48
Published on Saturday, March 24, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, March 25, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Nothing like a good old fashioned knock-down-drag-out to get those juices flowing, thanks and much enjoyed.

  • ruthless48 On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    thank you! (smile), cemetary was on the left.

  • JadedHeart On Sunday, March 25, 2012, JadedHeart (18)By person wrote:

    I could really visualise this. Thanks for sharing.

  • ruthless48 On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    gratzi ~ non fiction.

  • A former member wrote: I like it for some reason it's very simple but it's gets to the point. How I pictured this is two lovers not wanting to spoil the moment with words. Nicely written.

  • ruthless48 On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (173)By person wrote:

    exactly, and as winders of words, there are times they should not be woven. thank you


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