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Later to hell I shall fall
By Adam
The young ladies in the skirts,
The hoes
for moms in those shirts
I want to yell, to tell them all
That
they’re young women, not just whore dolls
Don’t put your
tits out here
Just so men will call you dear
Prostitutes you
advertise wrongly
But look the part oh so strongly
Mom
is lawful but daughter’s not
With that dress I can fit right in
her slot
Later to hell I fall
I just want to be in her tight
and small
The devil’s chamber’s I seek
Because these
underage girls I want to reap
Up and down my rod, she’s so cute
Out of my stick the juice will shoot
Mom and dad allow it
in public
Their daughter is flaunting all her subjects
One
more time hear my pleas
Don’t dress your 15 year old like a tease
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Copyright 2012 Adam
Published on Sunday, March 11, 2012.
Filed under:
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Author's Note:
Rules given on chatter... -ok write Poem that's titles later to hell I shall fall but you can only use your feelings... - I was really pissed at the amount of underage girls flaunting themselves tonight (at my job)Comments on "Later to hell I shall fall"
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On Thursday, April 4, 2019, Adam
(245)
wrote:
Reading this makes me sad I wrote it, not just the poem itself, but the entire premise. Who the fuck am I
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On Thursday, April 4, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Idk, don't be. I just got done reading all the comments. People are forgetting one thing, biology. Nature has developed & functioned the same way for aeons. Males are attracted to the female gender across any species as soon as they are able to breed. Any idea or system in place whether it's law, sciences, language, morals, ethics, societal-evolution, pedophilia or psychology are literally only in place because we accept them to be. These are all constructs of man & because of this, arguing that people aren't ready for sex until 18 years of age is inherently destined to fail due to instinctual biology. As soon as women can bleed, they can breed to put it bluntly & start producing estrogen & making pheromones designed to do exactly what they're intended to do; draw a sexual partner in. Think about when most people are teens exploring masturbatory curiosity, looking up porn & so on. We even know at young ages who looks good or cute, etc. Our legal-system will have to change in the future as more & more people come to accept being attracted to younger mates & more people getting locked up for it. Do not feel bad, people have put the evil in this idea. It is not natural to think of things in such a manner, much as lions eating each other or other species isn't murder punishable by law, it's natural & a beautiful cycle in reality. We could learn more to primal instinct if we stifled the formal psychologies because mankind has control issues with everything. In ancient times men wed & bred young girls, etc. And I don't want to hear the argument about life spans being shorter back then. Nature has continued to operate in the same manner for thousands of years. And I have a daughter & can comfortably say these things because it's science & it's true.
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A former member wrote:
I absolutely love this poem! You wrote exactly what I thought, just a lot less complex. Of course there's more to sluts than this poem but it would be an extremely long and complicated poem if you wrote everything that it entails. Anyway, love it! Keep writing!
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A former member wrote:
I really liked the message.
There was a British case lately where a man as let off for underage sex as the judge felt she was predatory.
It's interesting to see the point of view that it's not just the man's fault, but perhaps parenting also.
I did feel the flow could use a little work, but may be the way I read it.
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On Saturday, September 22, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
awesome now I know why I love this site so much. I have never come across a wide diverse site full of talent. Amazing!
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A former member wrote:
the sheer thrill this poems yields is like a drop of blood on my parched tongue..I love coming across such works
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A former member wrote:
Adam the issue you present is a dire one...and its not just how girls dress...but the way it is acceptable to society that guys behave the way they do as well. Its a vicious cycle encouraged by some parents and also by society itself. Of course some people will choose to dance around the 800 lb gorilla in the room and try to pick apart style, words, the ins and outs of poetry and what-not without ever really addressing the issue that you have presented here. Thank you so much for this poem...as a father I wish more people would call it as it is!
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Hook line sinker!! Hiiiii trLange.. beautiful comment..
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
My God you cant win for losing.. It was merely something you observed and had no control over other than a voice and still you find yourself having to explain.. well i appreciate the sentiment..
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A former member wrote:
Good write and they ARE flaunting themselves out. "You´re all whores" it says on a sold out t-shirt.
Their parents shoudl care more what they wear before they go out like that.
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
As a father I have to agree that most young girls dress too sexy but as a man in my 20's I have to say damn, lol.
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A former member wrote:
Great poem and very true mothers and fathers need to crack down soon for their daughters will be whores and always open thir legs like if they were a door so Plz parents don't let your daughter dress like a whore....so much detail I'm this loved it
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Adam.. fuck what people think i am going to say this.. The ins and outs of our timings.. I respect you .. Ive seen a few posts and always was impressed but this ... Did this come out of you ?.. Why are you hiding this from us?.. i mean .. you can express things that will be taken heed too and yet your only here once in a while.. come around more often.. this is your home .. a perfect ten..
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
You cannot even tell these day's if some girls are under age, it's such a shame how youth is thrown away, and I imagine such thoughts are in a lot of minds as they watch...... Nicely written Adam.
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