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sui caedere
By Corinthian
you.
unwearied
and
choking
me.
un.glittered
with
altar
shame
lonliness
chokes
me.
on
lightless
head
-tinkling
bell-
I want
to look up
into your light
+eyes+
we
blurr
together
+no music
no
sound +
we
shatter
this.
was
a
gorgeous
burn.
I
confess
this
terror.
wake
up
wake
up
.Lay
dying
innocent
with me
walls
of
sleet &
dream
unshining
unconsious
- violet (you)
&
dizzy blue(me)-
locked
up
locked
up
lost+
guttered
candles
.bruised
and
drip
ping
I
will
be
ok
when
I get
better .
found+
dracul listen .
http://youtu.be/B0uKaDkHugQ
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Copyright 2012 Dakrismena
Published on Monday, March 5, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, March 5, 2012, dwells
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wrote:
Your body (guessing at the title from my spanish background). Dracul in closing line was unexpected - perhaps Vlad the Impaler? Much to ponder, thanks.
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A former member wrote:
I just log in everyday in hopes that you wrote something , I am not a big glittery sparkly fru fru kinda man, but you really make me feel good when I am done reading and its so addictive that I just have to go back and read it all again , I won't pretend that I always know what your words mean, I just know I love the feeling that they bring me to, I thank you for that Corinthian. , who ever the subject is in your work he is a lucky person . It is apparant that you love someone with a full heart . The dark sanctuary song suits you well Sui Caedere the title is the word for suicide I hope this is just a title, the words that follow well you are just an elegant human being . Beautiful work of art you have created.
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On Monday, March 5, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
So sorrowful, I read while listening to the music...... Beautifully sad. The heart bleeds as the flowers bloom, I could lay in a poppy field with a broken heart and drown for a while.
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On Monday, March 5, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...do angels make poems? have they spoken this to you? (the music & the visuals are hypnotic, thanks for the extra gift)...
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A former member wrote:
you paint the stars and moon with eyes celestial, all obsidian lashed. lids closed to warmth, kisses unable to melt frosted tears..yet you are full of warmth that you don't feel, but I do.
Beautiful as always.
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