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Willing to Follow
By Sean Mc Shane
That night Our world was torn asunder
when She told me in a dream
that it was real . . .
. . . and then She slid under
She said " if you don't believe
then it was all just a myth,
that is the only reason
you cannot come with "
As I reached
for Her hand
something kept me at bay
The Phantoms of Love
always get their way
She wandered into the shadows
buried
Her heart in a hole
set fire to Her dream
then released Her
soul
She took Her own life
She considered me not . . .
So I did the same
Now in Love we rot . . .
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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Thursday, February 2, 2012.
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A former member wrote:
I love this, as I love You.
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, blue angel
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wrote:
I can certainly see why it made ~The Poem of the Day , spot light ~^_^~ Absolutely stunning brilliance*
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On Sunday, May 20, 2012, Nehema
(959) wrote:
'As I reached for Her hand something kept me at bay The Phantoms of Love always get their way' How beautiful and true is that? Excellent- thank you!
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On Monday, May 21, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
Thanks, R. And you're very welcome.
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Romeo and Juliet circa now. Well done and thanks, with some memorable lines.
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
Thanks again, dwells. And yes, from Bonnie & Clyde to Romeo & Juliet. I have a thing for doomed lovers.
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
wow...very very nice. keep it up :)
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
Thank you. And I definitely will
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
This is a wonderful write Sean...
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
As always M, thank you.
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A former member wrote:
I liked it, the dreary aspect of love, always a winner. good write!
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
I agree and thank you.
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