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Timid Galaxy
By serenesavage91
A quiet steady chorus,
Of rain on these locked doors.
The falling
stars and moon light,
Shining bright, bringing fright.
A
love poem is shredding,
Two hearts always fretting,
Searching
always for more,
Too timid to explore.
The midnight sun
is blinding,
The galaxy and all its binding,
Floating along connected,
Closely, blissfully, rejected.
Two hands reaching, seaking,
Finger tips barely meeting,
Comets through outer space,
Burning
up in a nowhere place.
A quiet steady chorus,
Of silence
on these locked doors,
The falling stars and moon light,
Bringing
lovers in this night.
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Copyright 2012 serenesavage91
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Timid Galaxy "
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On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, whisperingwalls
(219)
wrote:
I love your galactical imagery, normally larger themes and images come off as "too much" but the way this was written deals with them so nicely, agree with dwells, nicely done!
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
This was far out and cosmic, thanks for the ride, much enjoyed - well done.
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On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Polaris
(21) wrote:
I really enjoyed this. I too love to write about space and science.
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On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
Yes, I to am a fan of space and sci-fi, thanks for the fun rhymes.
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On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
A wonderful piece, I love the planets and outer space, I used to have a planetarium on my other computer's desktop and loved to explore it.
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A former member wrote:
Space Is The Place, Dope Rhymez ^_^ .
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