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Desire
By Ultimate Mistake
I looked up to the stars,
but all i saw was a quasar.
It is so
beautiful.
It is the most stunning site to behold.
Getting too
close is dangerous, I know,
but i draw nearer and nearer.
I want
to grab onto its beauty,
and hold onto it for an eternity!
Arm
in arm...
together to hear the angels sing.
Arm in arm...
forever just her and me!
I look back down to the grass.
Fantasies can never last.
A deep breathe is solemnly aquired.
A warm beauty is wearily desired.
My arms are left with a cold absence.
Will you fill its empty void with your presence?
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Copyright 2012 Ultimate Mistake
Author's Note:
This is about i girl i likeAwards
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A former member wrote:
perfection once again
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Devilish
(2658)
wrote:
Yes!! Beautiful.. hello there..
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Beautiful!! Any guy that can write a good romantic poem, and mean it, deserves to get the girl. Hope all works out for ya ;)
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
hah thanks :)
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
Damn, if only guys around here talked like that. Their idea of a romantic dinner is going to Sonic with the guys and their girls too. It's refreshing to see that some men/boys still have a romantic bone in their body.... And this is so incredibly sweet. Your word usage is also impressive. The way you describe every little detail, it really adds life to the poem. Brava!!
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
hahah thank you very much. If only the girls of my age group liked romantics instead of the" popular" guys at school
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
There are some. Don't give up hope. They're out there. And they're all saying they wish they could find guys that really care about the girl and her feelings instead of getting under her skirt. That's where you come in lol. You'll meet her. She's looking for you too. Patience, my boy, patience.
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman
(39) wrote:
Nice! ... Has she read it? :o
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
No. Should i read it to her? I was thinking of writing her a different poem for valentine's day:asking her out
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman
(39) wrote:
It depends on what kind of girl she is I guess. Cuz their some chicks that like things like this and others might think it's wierd. so idk if u should or not. But that would be really good if she was in to poetry
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
well thank you for your opinions. I appreciate it. I'll figure it out sooner or later lol
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman
(39) wrote:
no prob(:
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