. . don't move . .
By NikesRain
a pin drops
angels weep
demons sigh
the air breaks
thick with silence
fires dwindle
fast fading
coals
the world turns
oblivious
just
another day
gone in 24 hours
another pin falls
everyone hears it
no one moves
to pick it
up
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Copyright 2012 ~ dust
Published on Friday, January 20, 2012.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Monday, February 29, 2016, Drea
(1443) wrote:
The way you convey your thoughts is truly sublime.
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
Mystical Spirit, 'another day gone in 24 hours', a thing that's happened how many millions of times?...yet so mesmerizing when seen here.
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On Friday, January 20, 2012, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
I like the way you used subtle innuendo and ended with apathy. Clever. Sometimes the most profound things are said in a whisper.