"Remote"

By LadyBlackCatMoon

 Not really feelin the high
from our erotic dance
We've drifted into different voids,
lost in a mindless trance

Time will never tell,
and I'd rather go to Hell
Than feel the soul numbing pain
from your heart-breaking rein.

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Copyright 2012 LadyBlackCatMoon
Published on Tuesday, January 17, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, January 17, 2012, rosemaiden (237)By person wrote:

    Oh sis.............you described this time so well

  • dwells On Tuesday, January 17, 2012, dwells (5704)By person wrote:

    I'm taking you literally here with "rein" meaning a leather contrivamce to control the actions of a horse perhaps, and not reign which also works but means less to me in this piece - Thanks and nicely done.

  • LadyBlackCatMoon On Friday, January 20, 2012, LadyBlackCatMoon (14)By person wrote:

    Rein was meant as his control, though I do like how you thought of it as a controlling a horse. Which, ironically, my bf is born year of the horse.

  • LadyBlackCatMoon On Tuesday, January 17, 2012, LadyBlackCatMoon (14)By person wrote:

    Originally written on the 14th, of November 2011

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