Nightingales

By Ladyhawke

KAITLIN
Pure
Untammed

A lone fair flower
In a world made of tears
A pure, raw beauty surrounds

Color; in a coloress world
~


With a mid-summer melody
sings the song of the nightingale,
he sings of her eternal beauty.

Nights on a whispered willow
a song floats in the cool night air,
with a mid-summer melody.

So pure as the moon watches
a fair girl clad in white as she,
sings the song of the nightingale.

Melodious is the night
carrying ''kaitlin'' on his lips,
he sings of her eternal beauty.

 

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Copyright 2012 Ladyhawke
Published on Wednesday, January 11, 2012.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I wrote this for a friend of mine who is graduating. But I owe this all to lupus tenebrae, for if not for him, this poem would not exist at all. Much love....
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  • Selenophile On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile (30)By person wrote:

    Very memorable piece.

  • Nimue44 On Wednesday, December 24, 2014, Nimue44 (364)By person wrote:

    Astonishing. "Sweet" and "moonlit" is the words I would use to describe the magic of each stanza, but they're also musical. Brava!

  • Meadowhawk On Thursday, January 12, 2012, Meadowhawk (189)By person wrote:

    Beautifully versed! Sweet imagery.

  • theMayheM On Thursday, January 12, 2012, theMayheM (96)By person wrote:

    :) I love you!

  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, January 12, 2012, Ladyhawke (582)By person wrote:

    Awww, buddy.... :blush:

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, lupus tenebrae (1031)By person wrote:

    I would like to echo my many compliments already, by saying that it still impresses me. You give yourself far too little credit, I merely provided the tools, you utilized them to vivid perfection. Your love of structure shows, as you easily took to writing this, good show. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Excellent Ladyhawke. I am actually speechless on this one. It was very, very beautiful. Your friend is lucky to have such a talented friend as yourself! Bless you both! :) Great write! Scholar

  • dwells On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, dwells (5803)By person wrote:

    LT is mighty fine and wishing there was more to this lovely work, thanks Lady.


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