Fire Bug

By Alchemist

I'm the torchbearer for the bonfire of Vanities
So there's an inferno sparking in my heart
It's reaching five alarm and lighting up the dark

The stars are old, they rest in cold
They remind me of chill night smoke
And all the things that left me breathless
When I'm told to try and hold on

Picture this smoldering in your desires
After reaching scorching satisfaction   
I incinerate all that's transpired

I could have cauterized the holes
And been a dragon protecting my gold
But I couldn't stop it, flesh is gone
Instead I burned it all
Flame and ash and calm
My only feelings coming from the heat

The wounds become bubbled up scars
From skin pressed to red-hot iron bars
Now all my problems melt away
Purification with gasoline

A vigorous dance of immolation 
A haunted house for cremation
Until my body is home to arson
I'm a fire-starter in a blaze of catharsis
Charred remains as burnt offerings
My sacrifice is fuel for a firey hell 
And that promise is a pyro's paradise fulfilled


















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Copyright 2012 Alchemist
Published on Monday, January 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Thursday, April 25, 2013, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    Damn, it's been a few months and I'm just now realizing that this won poem of the day. Thanks Robyn and while I appreciate the comments from the two new comers I wish they would have given me more insight into content rather than their own preference to using rhyming words.

  • Nehema On Friday, February 15, 2013, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    CONGRATS on POD!! I can't believe I missed this when you posted it. I think the 4th stanza blew my mind, made my whole body hot inside n out. As far as punctuation - hello!!! this is poetry - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Well written, needs punctuation though. Other than that it was good. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Punctuation mark would have made your work more crystal. Try following a rythmic pattern as much as you can and a bit of rhyming to give your poem a musical pattern. Please re-do the poem. Try. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Nice Poem.. Very Well Executed.. Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, February 9, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    awesome pen worthy of the poem of the day. congrats A

  • A former member wrote: Nice, man! The first two lines drew me in. They reminded me of the song, "Rolling In The Deep" by Adele. It had a new twist, which I liked.

  • Alchemist On Monday, January 2, 2012, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    Yeah I love Adele truth be told you hit the nail on the head thats where the inspiration for this came from well at least the flow of it.

  • Devilish On Monday, January 2, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Fuckin beautiful shawn... As always... Glad to see you more.. You float my boat.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Excellent man! Great imagery and I loved the flow! Nice write! Very nice indeed! :) Scholar

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