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You see right through me
By ColorMeToxic
You know me so well...that when you look at
me
I feel naked,
unable to fake
a believable smile.
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© 2015 Beth Greene
Published on Monday, October 26, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I decided to write another 20 word piece. Thanks Nae. :)Comments on "You see right through me"
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On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430)
wrote:
That can be a wonderful feeling. To be seen as clear as crystal by someone.
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On Monday, December 12, 2011, Virgils Vigil
(75) wrote:
A delicate use of 20 words that accomplishes so much. Nice work.
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On Monday, December 12, 2011, Gemini
(31) wrote:
Very nice, it sounds like a mirror.
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On Sunday, December 11, 2011, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
i love it :)
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On Sunday, December 11, 2011, veingo
(532) wrote:
You should win, anyway. Lovely.. ^V^
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