Stain;

By whisperingwalls

 

 

The spilling of ink;

tepid

millions of entwined words

puddles of black

stain through the page

and leave an unkindness of ravens

spattered upon my writing desk.

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Copyright 2011 whisperingwalls
Published on Monday, December 8, 2014.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Why is a Raven like a writing desk?
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  • A former member wrote: This is so elegant. reminds me so much of alice in wonderland. My favorite thing in the world

  • QuartzAl18 On Friday, November 23, 2012, QuartzAl18 (21)By person wrote:

    Lmao so cool

  • A former member wrote: I love this! Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland... which by the way is my favorite movie

  • With love_Crow On Thursday, August 23, 2012, With love_Crow (83)By person wrote:

    I don't know Alice. Perhaps you can tell me why it is always tea time. I loved this.

  • Devilish On Thursday, August 23, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    I fucking miss your crazy beautiful ass. Congrats on POD baby.. Scholar

  • Zhee On Thursday, August 23, 2012, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    absolutely lovely!!!

  • A former member wrote: Great expression!

  • Devilish On Monday, December 5, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    I sent a marrage prposal UPS i'm waiting on a replay..LOl... Your gifted... From the toes the brain your gifted... Scholar

  • Feral On Monday, December 5, 2011, Feral (87)By person wrote:

    Because it can produce a few notes, tho they are very flat; and it is nevar put with the wrong end in front.

  • whisperingwalls On Monday, December 5, 2011, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    Few notes Xd, puns slay me, not going to lie.

  • Feral On Monday, December 5, 2011, Feral (87)By person wrote:

    Haha, that was Carroll's own reply :P

  • Feral On Monday, December 5, 2011, Feral (87)By person wrote:

    Carroll never did acid, actually. He wrote Alice as a way of showing the "evils" of mathematics & how it would draw followers away from God.

  • A former member wrote: Thanks for this piece. It was amazing, especially with the ravens on the writing desk.

  • Virgils Vigil On Monday, December 5, 2011, Virgils Vigil (75)By person wrote:

    They're spirits of the night, manifestations of ourselves, or simply inspirational deities to pour our stains upon. Insightful piece. Scholar

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