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. . . ravissement . . .
By NikesRain
~*~
with lotus elegance
beneath adamantine
he speaks sensual
impassioned consecrations
sketched upon me
temptuous
decadence
seraphic we evanesce
transcendent
infinite
~*~
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Copyright 2011 NikesRain
Author's Note:
minimalist entryWorks Inspired By ". . . ravissement . . ."
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A former member wrote:
you are beautiful and so are your words thank you doe.
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On Sunday, November 20, 2011, Virgils Vigil
(75)
wrote:
Even more beautiful the second time I read it. Well done.
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A former member wrote:
I love love the word 'adamantine'. A well worked moment of sensuality in this. The imagery does flow very well in the moment. Could be a winner.
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On Saturday, November 19, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
It is with this piece, that I now question my chances in said contest. Such elegant imagery, and it appears wispy due to "evanesce", something fleeting yet tangible. *begins knitting a white flag*.
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