The Beast In Me

By WoundsLikeStars

Long ago, when my eyes were turned

A beast invaded me

 

I neither invited nor resisted it

 

I became a carrier, a host to blackened desires

And I've learned to wield,

Silence,

Chain,

And unleash this fiend when it suits me best...

 

But your presence is simply making any control a false inclination...

 

Your “come unto me” stance has broken the chain,

Your unholy mouth has opened the gate,

Your arching spine has destroyed any hold,

Your parted veil has crumbled my precious sanity

 

And the beast in me is about to be the beast in you.

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Copyright 2011 WoundsLikeStars
Published on Monday, October 31, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

The absolute joy of losing control.
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  • A former member wrote: I relate to this, This poem makes me want to howl at the moon, run with a pack of wolves. your beast spoke to mine. Excellent write a well deserved poem of the day award-MrK

  • whisperingwalls On Tuesday, November 1, 2011, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    And the beast in me is about to be the beast in you.. Wow, hard-hitting. I'm glad I stumbled upon this, keep on.

  • dwells On Monday, October 31, 2011, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    A beastly tale and a warning to the ladies! Wait just a minute, I think they like it? Well done sir.

  • Devilish On Monday, October 31, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    i'm a fan... You won me... Truely undeniable talent... Natural born poet... Scholar

  • WoundsLikeStars On Monday, October 31, 2011, WoundsLikeStars (56)By person wrote:

    Devilish, you're so encouraging. Thank you so much for making me feel so welcome.

  • A former member wrote: HOLY S***. that was mind blowing. i absolutely am stunned at this brilliance! the last line, the way you ended it.. DAMN! "and the beast in me is about to be the beast in you." what a .. just .. i am speechless with awe! i have no concept of how you can be so magnificent with your words. but, i do believe, you have gained a fan. epic!

  • WoundsLikeStars On Monday, October 31, 2011, WoundsLikeStars (56)By person wrote:

    Thank you, so very much. Something about losing control makes me want to write and write.

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